dont ask me about my sexuality youre not gonna get a straight answer
Oh my Fuckin
Do you realize how annoying it is when you don’t switch paragraphs when a new character is speaking
Do you realize how confusing it is
I don’t care if they’re using one-word responses at each other, start a new damn paragraph.
ESPECIALLY IF YOU HAVE MORE THAN ONE CHARACTER.
dear christ this.
no more walls of text please. please.
There are stylistic exceptions to this rule. If you’re trying to give the sense of a conversation seamlessly overlapping, you could say:
"Yes," she said, even as her sister whispered, "No, please.”
Compare that to:
"Yes," she said, even as her sister whispered:
That hard return interrupts the flow of the sentence. In the first example, they fit together quite naturally. In the second, there’s that beat of a pause. Sometimes it’s important not to have that pause; sometimes it’s important to let the words flow together to get across the mood or meaning. So long as it’s clear who is speaking, and so long as you’re using this kind of tool deliberately, with a clear understanding of what you’re trying to accomplish, it should stay in your writer’s toolkit.
Everyone is freaking out about how ‘sudden’ Haru’s change of heart is and I think they’re failing to realize something pretty important. Haru swimming professionally is something that’s been discussed since the beginning of the season, so its obviously something he was…
i talk a lot of shit for someone who can’t choose rude dialogue options in games because i’m scared of hurting a characters feelings
*casually fucks up every good thing that happens to me*
Harley is a gift from God.
This is why Harley is like my all time favorite!
Why did they leave out the best part of this scene?;
The character development of Harley is probably one of the better things DC has done with their characters.
"At least you love me." I say to my pet as I hold them against my chest as they try to get away